As the sharp, pointy rocks carve into the solid hull, as the knackered joints of the stern twist and flex, the ghostly shape sits upon the lonely mountain. Although it is abandoned, it is ready to rock and roll. As the explorers turn the corner, their dog falls over in amazement.
Rudy Louw
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Nice writing
ReplyDeleteI like the specific nouns you have used in your writing like hull and stern. They help paint a picture in my mind without having to use lots of unnecessary words!
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